Flaxmere waterworld

Yay yay we're going swimming!

Last  week  we went to the Flaxmere waterworld to learn how to swim.The first class was my class and then it was Room 21s turn to go swimming then after Room 21 had their turn it was Room 19s turn and then after Room 19 had their turn then it was Room 18s turn.

It  smells of chlorine.I felt the bottom of the pool it had slippery tiles at the bottom of the pool.I heard little waves coming from the pool.I felt excited to go swimming in the deep pool when I got into the pool it was cold  in the pool.I saw two pools and one of them was deep and one wasn't deep.

The teacher said “do dolphins dives to the end of the pool and back” and when we all got back from the other side the teacher said “do freestyle to the end of the the pool and back“

My favourite part was when we had to do dolphin dives because we could pretend we were really dolphins. I will be working on freestyle and backstroke when I go to the pools.

Family camping

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Yay yay my family and I  are going camping, I am so excited.I wondered where we were  going  I kept on asking  but they won't tell me.On the way we went through the desert island

and we saw snakes.On the way we stopped  at the dairy I got a chocolate milk and some

lollies and some gum.We saw a humongous fair.  I said “can we go there please?” My Mum said “yes”.I am so so so so excited.I got so sleepy that I accidentally  fell asleep.”Wakie,wakie” said my brother and sister. I looked outside and we were there “yay yay yay” I said.After we put  everything in the right place we went for a walk.When we got back me and my sister and my brother got into our pjs. Mum and Dad were getting the barbeque ready for dinner. We are having  sausages and  marshmallows for dinner.After dinner my sister and brother read a story to me, after the story we all went to bed.

Swing Bridge

WALT - use our senses and the 5 W’s when writing

There was two little girls their names are Holly and Olive.They were going on a  adventure and then they discovered an old gross and rusty ragged bridge.They went over the bridge  they  got  faster and   keep  going  and  kept going  and  then they  got to  the  over  side  and  then  they discovered a  magical  land  but  the land    was damp and all the magic was  all  gone.